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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-03-28 07:19 PM


Another Night In The Casbah


It wasn't as exciting as
I thought it would be.
I wanted this belly dancer
and she wanted me,  but...
before the evening was done,
I knew she wasn't the one.
Her kiss was unappealing to me,
her hips gyrated every time
that we kissed and her belly
was beating the hell out of me.


JamesLee
March26
2005
Wondering, but not too passionately,
what it would be like to kiss a
belly dancer...

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Huan Yi
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1 posted 2005-03-29 02:57 AM



Non Sum Qualis Eram Bonae Sub Regno Cynarae

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-03-29 03:58 AM


whoa what a ride!
majnu
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3 posted 2005-03-29 05:54 PM


i laughed out loud!

-majnu
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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-30 09:41 PM


Thank you Huan, passing shadows and manjnu..
This was meant to be humurous, but I'm also a little curious, but not too...
Huan, I'm not sure what your words mean, perhaps you have actually kissed a belly dancer...if so, how was it...James

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