The End Renewing when it hurts

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Open Poetry #35

The End Renewing when it hurts

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-03-28 12:20 PM

Lies the web of deception
what else is there to really
mention. I'm not meant to be
happy.

It comes and goes like a mist of
perfume from a rose as it wittles
up and dies and starts anew. which
is what I now must do.

Die take the course and renew
bury what is bothering my soul inside
no more tears why cry. things just turn
out how we don't want them to be. I just
don't know how much more my heart can
take the bleed..

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-03-28 02:57 PM

Yes I can understand the words

I can understand the talent as well

Dave

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-03-28 03:06 PM

thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2005-03-29 08:46 PM

dark and interesting.

good read.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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