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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-03-27 06:38 PM





"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2005-03-27 08:00 PM


This is the kind of petry that I like. I am not absolutely clear as to waht you are saying, and that causes mye to strecth my thinking and decide for myself.
Great Job.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-03-27 08:32 PM


cool creation here


Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-03-27 08:53 PM


stunning - I find myself enveloped in the imagery and the slide of the words across my mind  S


If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-03-28 09:17 AM



I wish I had written Susan's response! ~ and your poem!


EA

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5 posted 2005-06-17 09:07 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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