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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-03-27 03:26 PM



Froggy Inspiration

Blinding crescent orb flaming light rising rising rising on heads sore eyes gay life to survive
Deep body longing filled aching touching red colour flushing fill
Wind rustling branch waving fear inspiring peace touching inwards in solitude in branches of waves
Senuous in movement on short cropped trodden grass on old ground  asking discipline in the covers of ambition
Wetted on short crops of early spring and chistmas blossom

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-03-27 03:51 PM


Dave,
Good description, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-03-27 04:45 PM


glad you got inspired
froggy
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3 posted 2005-03-27 10:54 PM


Hey Dave,
  Love this.
Thank-you for the comment,glad I was able to give you the inspiration on this piece.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2005-03-27 11:12 PM


I love this! and can enjoy it doubly  considering the inspiration.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-03-28 09:01 AM


Some mighty fine poetic turns of phrase! This was a vivid and stirring poem!

~ thanks to Froggy for inspiring such a fine write!

"Wind rustling branch waving fear inspiring peace touching inwards in solitude in branches of waves" ~ WOW!

Love & Light,
Linda

DavePage
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6 posted 2005-03-28 02:18 PM


Seymour Tabin

Dave,
Good description, enjoyed.

Thanks Seymour

Dave

passing shadows

glad you got inspired

Down to Froggy but I will do the next for those who cant see and cant hear

Dave



froggy

Hey Dave,
  Love this.
Thank-you for the comment,glad I was able to give you the inspiration on this piece.

:-)
Within this heart you'll find love

Froggy you made me think.

My thanks are to you.

Dave

Midnitesun

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I love this! and can enjoy it doubly  considering the inspiration.

Thanks Midnight and I should apologise in advance for if I ever start on the book again.

The character Midnight Blue is a Lady and that is all I will say.

Earth Angel

Mystic shores of forevermore~



Some mighty fine poetic turns of phrase! This was a vivid and stirring poem!

~ thanks to Froggy for inspiring such a fine write!

"Wind rustling branch waving fear inspiring peace touching inwards in solitude in branches of waves" ~ WOW!

Love & Light,
Linda  

Thanks Linda

Nice words from you

Dave

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7 posted 2005-03-29 08:52 PM


ramble on man.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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