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zenny
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0 posted 2005-03-27 11:54 AM


Once again
my mind gets tricked
into thinking
         about you .
Remembering...
   each tender touch and
        whispered words
             and teasing smiles
                 and ...
Longing...
for another moment
with you, simply enjoying
being together.
Counting....
days and nights, hours and minutes
untill the arrival
of that.

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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-03-27 02:12 PM


Nice thoughts.

Short and sweet.

Dave

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2 posted 2005-03-27 04:57 PM


it's a nice feeling, yes?

good write

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Saluting with misty eyes
3 posted 2005-03-27 08:49 PM


Have you been reading my thoughts???
This is a very good job of sayingg what I feel at this moment.
Great Job!!

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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