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David2
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0 posted 2005-03-27 09:36 AM



In My Dream

Relaxed, upon my bed, and quite at ease,
I closed my eyes and watched your image dance.
An image too intense to merely tease,
A beauty too extreme to not entrance.
I saw you laze upon a silken bed,
And thought the silk too rough for one so fine.
Your tenderness should rest on clouds instead,
In testament to God’s unique design.
Then as exquisite eyes gazed into mine,
The power of your beauty claimed my soul.
I knew our love took form by grand design,
For once again my heart was yours to hold.

We strolled along the margin of a stream,
Your hand in mine, together, in my dream.


© Copyright 2005 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-27 09:41 AM


Pure Rapture
TD

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2 posted 2005-03-28 07:03 PM


Nice...James
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3 posted 2005-03-30 10:31 PM


Hold tight to this....hold tight, even if it disappears the moment you touch....these things do come true, sometimes.

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4 posted 2005-03-30 11:26 PM


lovely. much enjoyed. Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Heather Miller
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5 posted 2005-04-01 01:09 AM


Very heart felt and BEAUTIFUL<><

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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