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Open Poetry #35

The Shining Feeling

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2005-03-27 07:59 AM

From where I stand I see the thaw
and on the frozen floor
the sun upon the glowing crust
is glistening bright and pure.

Upon the rolling marbled hills
the glossy snowdrifts ride.
There is no place nor earthly thrill
like springtime greenwood life.

A musty scent is on the air,
I lift my head and breathe.
Out of the sky I seem to hear
a calling on the breeze.

The sound of God and life and wild,
the sound of earth that grows,
out of the wind that whispers by
the sound of trees that moan.

I know just why it is I care,
I bend my head and pray.
I cannot lock them in my heart
these tear drops on my face.
© Eric True

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-03-27 08:31 AM

Out of the sky I seem to hear
a calling on the breeze.

Me, too, Eric

M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-03-27 08:42 AM

ethome
It's your reverence for life, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-27 09:16 AM

good to read you again

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-03-27 02:52 PM

Excellent words

Enjoyed

dave

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-03-27 04:10 PM

Eric

Very spirit connected and beautiful!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-03-27 04:23 PM

There is no place nor earthly thrill
like springtime greenwood life.

~*~

Ah, the promise...renewed.

Thank you, Ethome!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-03-28 09:21 AM

Eric, your glorious words ring so True.

I savoured each and every line. Beautiful images and thoughts.

Love & Spring Light,
Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-03-28 12:31 PM

How very lovely... Like EA said... this is one to savor. *S*

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