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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-03-26 09:15 PM


A vision seemed to me to be an image decorating whatever facade embodying

Spirit embossed itself selectively on future goals of ripeness

Movements chastening objection
Circling within desires

draining in the hot sun
dreams

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Gaia
1 posted 2005-03-26 09:26 PM


painting the sky
with thoughts of why
a spirit sometimes colors itself
in an unexpected hue


happy weekend to you, Dave

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2 posted 2005-03-26 09:37 PM


Thanks Midnite

Have a very good one

Dave

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