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Open Poetry #35
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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-03-26 08:11 PM


When
Will the sun go down

When
Will the air cool

And who are these people
Standing
At the foot of my death

Who tell me how painful
Their lives are
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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-03-26 08:34 PM

I understand this.

Dave
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2005-03-26 08:38 PM

very powerful

a touch of humanity so often lacking
miscellanea
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OH
3 posted 2005-03-26 08:49 PM

Interesting perspective and powerful words!

   miscellanea
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-26 08:58 PM

everyone has a cross to bear
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