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Open Poetry #35

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-03-26 07:40 PM

Deep within her light brown eyes ran memories of earth grass mellowed lushness
Tempered

In her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain
Answered

In her upbringing she knew of her magic
She knew large trees would grow animals stalking
In a world

In her mind she was entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned

In her desires she spoke of that launch that would embed her in a cosy glory of self

To be continued

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-03-26 09:10 PM

Dave

The beginning of an interesting character sketch. Enjoyed!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-03-26 09:27 PM

Yes, I agree with Martie. Carry on Dave !
Easter hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-03-27 03:40 PM

Yes, I am looking forward to the
continuation of this...

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-04-21 10:16 PM

large trees would grow animals~`
had strange dream on that. this is good

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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