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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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and even then you didn't answer me only looked away as if the sun didn't shine only clouds were visible that day and you looked at me sideways as if to say it's over though my reply to you was it never really began |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The unfinished sifts vibrant in time. Hugs, TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome Kacy. Hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I love this Midnight dave |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Then it makes starting over pretty hard don't ya' think.  You make brevity so admirable! I like that about you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
these lines: and even then you didn't answer me only looked away are amazingly gripping. the usage of all lowercase is so sudden, like interupting a conversation, or turning on a radio mid sentence that you focus in on what is being said to try and piece together what might have come before. excellent. -majnu |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
*bump* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I miss this lady a lot.... and many others do, too. |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
Nod. I had to look for this one, and I really wish I had told her how well done I thought this was... sigh  |
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