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Sun of faith
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0 posted 2005-03-26 05:34 AM


Arising from the ashes of devistation
I stand now alone,
Slowly but surely finding comfort
In what I had forgotten

A smile now replacing a frown
Late better then never,
I can finally see the light
Now and forever

I am the first to admit I was brocken
now im the one to mend,
Rebuilding what I know I once was
To show I am who I am!



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-26 07:58 AM


very positive attitude here

I enjoyed this

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-03-26 09:23 AM


Very well done..I enjoyed this one.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Ratleader
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3 posted 2005-03-26 09:28 AM


It's the only way....

Pick up the broken blocks, and build, build.....

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ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2005-03-26 11:43 AM


I loved the hope in this...
as it is exponential for all that love you.
Great write.
TD

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-03-26 11:47 AM


~ and you are a magnificent Phoenix!


EA

Sun of faith
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6 posted 2005-03-26 08:09 PM


there is no darkness wthout light to teach us of ourselves
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