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0 posted 2005-03-26 03:32 AM


I feel crazy and wrong,
To love somehow,
Who has lost faith in me,
My loves turn upside down,
My heart inside out,

I sob without tears,
My soul filled with fear,
I reach out to touch her,
To let her know how much I love her,

But she stays distant,
And my eyes filled up again,
I try to breathe,
And catch my thoughts,
Make this pain stop,

She has erased me today,
And I can’t forget her,
For she has become my passion,
No amount of reason can shift,
My love for her that grips me tonight,
Chokes me every waking moment,

Fight for her I will,
If I have to a thousand wars,
But she has left me alone now,
To console my broken heart,

Now I am tired and lost,
Don’t know who to talk to,
I turn to her, and she looks
Past me, into the future,
Which is without me,
And I without her.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-26 05:35 AM


Absolutely beautiful, im feeling the same right about now man
Sun of faith
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2 posted 2005-03-26 05:38 AM


Absolutely beautiful, im feeling the same right about now man
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-03-26 08:30 AM


so much emotion here

wow

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4 posted 2005-03-26 11:39 AM


awe honey *sigh love stinks don't it?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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