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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-03-25 09:10 PM



Sleeping Beauty dry your eyes
don't go to sleep with those
pale blue eyes

wake up to the day is sun
sleeping beauty your loved
by everyone. lips as pale as
can be. Can't you see your the
one for me.

Dust away those sleepers in your
eyes,no need to say goodbye. I will
always be there for you. Just remeber
that I love you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2005-03-27 02:38 PM


your words yearn like one in a dream, finding that special person, only to awake with tears and memories. very passionate piece.
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-03-27 02:41 PM


Like the words but I kept thinking of "Sleepy, Dozy, Sneezy, Grumps, Happy and the Crew" and all those diamonds

Nice one

Dave

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-03-27 04:56 PM


very sweet
Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-03-27 11:16 PM


yea thank's guys

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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