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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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The pain without you by myself how do I ever try to strive? how it takes over my body my soul my mind. Time time is a horrible thing tick tock flowing ever so slowly as the tears run down my eyes till I see you again. The feelings of doubt posioned my brain the kind that makes me want to go inside. I just want this sad feeling to go away I want to be happy just most any day. I press on trying sometimes I get tired of al this crying. One day it shall pass they all do say untill time has taken all my pain away I hate time... Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hate TIME's ways somedays too! Enjoyed the write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
There have been many occasions when I wanted more time...with someone I cared for...James |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Your words make people think and we need that time and feel that we waste it when we have it but we dont We burn in into our memories and if we didn't care we wouldn't and there would be no memory dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate to this a lot |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
I'm glad everyone liked it *sigh a good thing about my tragic romance life is the stuff i can write about lol Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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