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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-03-25 11:35 AM


The Lost Muse

In an upside down existence
where the attic is dark and
the main floors are hollow,
there is,

In the cellar of destiny, the lamps buy

some light where dreams would hide
in shadowed gloom,

where fruits, blanched or squeezed,
mingle with musk of other souls,

for it is the between of times,

In the season of fantasy when the rains trick

all, crystallizing spring’s highlights,
frosting new budding promises at their peak…

and a poet sighs
for the neglected joy
of her muse.

~*~

The italicized lines are courtesy of:
http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrygenerator.html

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-03-25 11:38 AM


sigh...

lovely momma k....

you just keep gettin better 'n better....

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-03-25 11:55 AM


In an upside down existence
where the attic is dark and
the main floors are hollow,
there is,

In the cellar of destiny, the lamps buy
It seems like yours has been on a revitalizing vacation, bringing back to you a visit from the other side...if she ever was?  I think not, but she certainly brings forth some hypnotic ventures....lovely...

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3 posted 2005-03-25 11:56 AM


Oh I do love this so much!
And thanks for the link!!
Hugs~N.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

froggy
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4 posted 2005-03-25 08:36 PM


Hey Sunshine,
Love this,enjoyed the read too.

:-)

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5 posted 2005-03-25 08:38 PM


~SIGH~
Martie
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6 posted 2005-03-25 09:31 PM


Thanks sissie...my muse has been hiding...maybe this will help me.  The poem is beautiful too!!  
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7 posted 2005-03-25 10:25 PM


Enjoyed very nice
James_A_Fraser
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8 posted 2005-03-26 09:32 AM


She isn't lost, she's merely unreported....



~~J

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9 posted 2005-03-26 10:36 AM


nice write
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10 posted 2005-03-30 02:20 PM


ah, do we all know this, mine is not only lost she has been officially reporte MIA..
JL
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11 posted 2005-03-30 02:21 PM


WOW.... Indeed.  I do agree.

JL


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12 posted 2005-04-03 07:22 PM


vacationing, not lost
passing shadows
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13 posted 2005-04-03 07:50 PM


neat link

cool poem

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14 posted 2005-04-03 08:01 PM


I was wondering where I'd put that... doh!



looks like you inspired a whole crop of lexus to grow Sunshine... just a little Sunshine and some water -- and the fertile soil of poetic minds!


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15 posted 2005-04-03 08:22 PM


Reb...if that's all I do...
then I'm ahead of the game...

GROW!

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16 posted 2005-04-03 10:03 PM


"for it is the between of times,

In the season of fantasy when the rains trick

all, crystallizing spring’s highlights,
frosting new budding promises at their peak…"


Hiya Kari!  Elusive muse, huh?  I WISH mine was around as much as yours...  



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