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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-25 12:17 PM



keeping promises


why does it
matter if we meet
on one day verses
the next.

who cares which way
the trade winds blow
as long as they
have a cooling
effect.

I do...


JamesLee
March25
2005

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Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA
1 posted 2005-03-25 12:31 PM


Short and sweet.  Well done with a great message.  You don't want to go losing any days now.  When it's right, it matters.  Well said.

Kevin

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-25 06:30 AM


yupper, totally agree with Kevo...from beginning to.....smiles and hugs
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-03-26 10:53 PM


Thank you Kevo and Lee...I wasn't 100 percent in agreement if I should have said "I do or I don't."...James
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