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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2005-03-24 07:26 PM



To recede from
your lips...

As if an echo broken on the
edge of distant hills.

Falling less until a silence is
found...that only you can
hear.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (03-24-2005 09:38 PM).]

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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
1 posted 2005-03-24 07:31 PM


Loving the tenderness of your writing!  All the creative word choices to touch one's senses...
           miscellanea

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-03-24 08:04 PM


So delicate is the touch of your pen...
Much enjoyed Eric.
Hugs~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-25 07:32 AM


yes, extremely spiritual...dang, you certainly do grab emotion by some celestial highway....lovely!
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2005-03-25 09:00 AM


oh Eric, you leave me with a sigh at such beauty..
gawd, I love the way you write...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-03-25 09:01 AM


Fall some more, or less...
but remember
to leave the poetry behind...


Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
6 posted 2005-03-25 12:46 PM


Erotic...

yes..that is nice.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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