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Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2005-03-24 06:35 PM

Mirrored Invisible

I find comfort in the distance
as I walk through the glass
trusting instinct, pursuing nothing
but the hopes and dreams,
illusions at best.

Edged in thoughts of loving,
but the "window of pain"
always there to remind
that there is truth in voice
as another Spring awakens
and I press back the tears of
yesterday's once.

A cherished photo, the only one
that could open doors
to a lonely mind, like a first love.
I live "the absence of you",
motionless at times,
speechless always.

An admission of heart,
the "price of passion."
In other words titled,
parentheses mine.

~A~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-24 06:40 PM

so much said here, so much felt

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2005-03-24 07:15 PM

OH MY GOODNESS! I love this! Straight from the heart to my library! You so often convey something that at some time or another I have felt, but was unable to sort into words. Gee, I wish I had your knack!

misc'e

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-03-26 12:03 PM

Excellent

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2005-03-30 02:04 PM

Your poetry is so full of love and emotion.
But most of all it is sincere and straight from the heart.

This I know.
Hugs, you~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-03-30 02:07 PM

Very emotional write, but full of life learned wisdom.

JL

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-03-30 02:10 PM

What a wonderful line...

"parentheses mine"

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2005-04-25 01:57 PM

"A cherished photo, the only one
that could open doors
to a lonely mind, like a first love.
I live "the absence of you",
motionless at times,
speechless always."

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captured me

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

8 posted 2005-04-25 03:27 PM

"Edged in thoughts of loving,
but the "window of pain"
always there to remind
that there is truth in voice
as another Spring awakens
and I press back the tears of
yesterday's once."

Really liking this. Excellent....

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

9 posted 2005-04-26 11:35 PM

Wonderful write, simply wonderful.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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