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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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~*~ Kansas is an odd place where else can you find seagulls massing over March green that doesn’t move They come in with the gulf stream calling Kansas home [again], then take thoughts away back to the sea and you wonder why shells are found in Kansas. The gulls come home, like their ancestors, when this vast was under water How easy to see Kansas again when someone talks to you of Dorothy or Toto How easy it is to think it just one way flat black and white dust and tornadoes They don’t see these vast swellings of land nor blowing of wind Which is easy to miss if you are not looking or feeling ... I can create the wind ~ I can blow and you would hear Kansas But only if I am right by your ear would you feel it ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling... step closer... so I might feel more. Lovely, just lovely dear momma k... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Now it's my turn.... Dang woman, what a drift you weave, images taking the reader to all kinds of lovely places...the admiration which seeps through your words, the confidence that walks with you, is quit the gift in knowing you... And....I ain't whistlin Dixie... No pun intended on PS.... Hugs |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I have never been there. Until now. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now you make me have wanderlust!! Wonderful piece of work here Karilea. Hugs~Hip-Sis For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
to Kansas! (Wish I could see your lovely state for myself, but until then, you've sketched attractive scenery to entice!) misc'e |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how I would love to visit Kansas. Thankyou for this glimpse Karilea. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I can see very well how the fields of wheat are indeed like the sea, and the sound of the wind within them, the crash of waves...yes, I can see...thanks to you!!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karilea, that was exceptionally lovely. I found myself clicking my heels and saying,"I want to go home. I want to go home. I want to go to your Kansas home!"  Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No one can affect the weather (though some do pretend to with a pretty convincing schtick....), but if I could I'd conjure a storm that would sweep you, house and all, away from Kansas and southward to some warm place near the sea....and I'd whomp any wiz who tried to bring you back! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
another nice write  smiling here,my friend |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at the 'Kansas' canvas, an ocean of thoughts; and I thought 'SEA' gulls never went that far inland except to congregate around the city dumps! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I feel it ...... wonderful poem, Karilea! Hope your Easter weekend was lovely. ....jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Reads like a day trip, poeticly speaking. You took me there Karilea, and it is beautiful. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Transported through your words. Enjoyed my visit to Kansas. JL |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
loving the view of your state! Thanks for this beaut! Sadie |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kansas is golden wheat fields dorothy and toto a lovely state of mind that i always wanted to visit |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
very beautiful - |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely written... regards sudhir |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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