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Yesterday Remembers
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Yesterday Remembers |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Small were the fingers wrapped in curve of tender hold touching, reaching for tomorrow.... and growing Echoes resound days of innocence worn on sleeves of youth when children's laughter was heard. Oh! What precious sounds escaped the mouths of babes and smiles were born to live on in cherished hold of heart. Like a small seed leaning towards the light always seeking, climbing; rising to the sky... Yes, blowing in the wind and asking why, sometimes bending to and fro at times uncertain, of which way to go... hold on steadfast, strong and true and if clouds move in to make you blue don't be afraid to take my hand... know that I love you and understand. Time will pass and today will move on Yesterday remembers...... fingers wrap in curve of tender hold~ touching, reaching... together we'll grow..... The quietest noise I'm told is the sound of letting go.. Eddie/Troy [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-24-2005 12:04 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Yesterday remembers...... fingers wrap in curve of tender hold~ touching, reaching... together we'll grow....." How lovely, soft and gentle Donna.. Much enjoy your writing of late. ~Sending warm hugs your way~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I am fond of yesterdays and memories, this title speaks for itself... but the inward hold of love is tenderly fragile... not grasping at what will be, but nurturing all that will be. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this is exactly the words in feelings, when I look at my grand daughter, a generous read of vacation thoughts.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am going to send a link to this to my daughter...she'll love it she doesn't spend much time here anymore...teenage life, so hectic yaknow |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
growing together tree and sapling mother and child sharing the same root never from from eachoters heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ofttimes one of the measures of the beauty and import of a poem, is not by the number of replies it receives, but by the thought that readers put into them. The responses you received were thoughtful and appreciative of both your talent and the feelings that your words evoked in your readers. We identify with what you write, Gentle Spirited One. You speak for all of us at one time or another in our lives.  Hugs with love, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-24-2005 07:12 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What beautiful language! Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
For my daughter yes... she will be thirteen very soon and I thought I might give this to her. (cuz we all know how teenage years can be hard.. on both child and parent  )Thank you all, for such lovely and kind replies. Hugs and peace ya'll I really want to care, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*faint* teenage years are hard? NO?? I would rather run naked, in a parade, with zombies chasing me and MTV filming it all rather than to do teenage years again...  good luck with that Donna!!! As for the poem...beautiful! She should be moved by it as was I.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A very lovely poem here Donna...enjoyed the rhyme and subject too...thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susan, and Phil, thank you both so very much. Hugs. I really want to care, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yo do tender lovely donna..enjoyed this side of your heart place |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dark, thanks for allowing me to show it. Vandanna, hi there gal, and thanks. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is a treasure to be kept...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you Sea. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Warm and lovely..:-) Thank you. ---------ice ><> |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
sweet stuff, i wish i can witness this in my own eyes one day. great write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna You write the tenderness of a mother's love. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and to think it's been thirteen years since I held those tiny little fingers this week...  thank you, all for being you. Peace and hugs. I really want to care, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
April honey, happy birthday. I love you... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Happy Birthday, April! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone. Luv u to mom. |
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