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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-03-24 04:41 AM



Blaring silence,
flakes fell to drifts
from tangerine skies.
''i loved you so much
twenty years ago''. He said.
''But i adore you more
within this elapsing second''.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-03-24 07:01 AM


perhaps great respect is peeping through the curtains....???
Very pretty way to see someone

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-03-24 01:55 PM


a heartfelt piece
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3 posted 2005-03-25 10:04 AM


Rose, this is golden. I love a poem that shakes me like gravel on a screen!

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-03-25 10:06 AM


Goldenrose,
A touch of much.

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