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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-24 01:32 AM


Make Me Laugh
Make Me Smile


She's so cute,
like an angel
that can make
me laugh, make
me smile.
In this place
where happiness
is, I want to
linger for awhile.
Will tomorrow
be the same
because tonite
is the place
I want to be.
What a lovely
warm feeling in
my heart, when
she's this
close to me.


JamesLee
March24
2005

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-24 02:02 PM


I love to read how you feel
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-24 02:19 PM


who wouldn't want to stay? Happy colored write
Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
3 posted 2005-03-24 03:02 PM


This is great.
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2005-03-24 03:06 PM


this is so sweet James.  Enjoyed much.
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

5 posted 2005-03-24 07:17 PM


Nice write James!

Eric

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-03-24 07:19 PM


Ahhh this is so charming James.
Hugs~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
7 posted 2005-03-24 07:22 PM


I agree with Lee!  A pleasant time

  miscellanea

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