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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-03-23 06:09 PM



I can take it any longer
the feelings keep getting
stronger.Tore between you
and your sick heart.

Crying eyes I should just
pull my heart apart. break off
a pieace and render to me when
done.

I can't take this any longer
I can't bare this anymore
I just want to be with you


WHy can't he leave me alone and
be happy,why must I give in and care
and be all love sick happy.

This is my choice my future at stake
I won't let you ruin this no not this
time not this day.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2005-03-25 12:19 PM


Sometimes things never seem to go right because we're with the wrong person...James
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-03-25 12:26 PM


true i got rid of the wrong person yet he still lingers

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


WindWalker
Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

3 posted 2005-03-25 02:03 AM


this is a touching piece of writing! And I must agree with 'JamesMichael'; "Sometimes things never seem to go right because we are with the wrong person."

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-03-25 06:34 AM


no one ever wants to hurt another, this is a heart wrenching write...hugs
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