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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-03-23 05:57 PM



Seeing your eyes how they are
soft and kind
The big strong presence is
a mere sence of how you
are not inside

Your so kind so soft
caring,Sincere
the way your eyes well
up the shade of pale
blue that is a window
into your soul of dreams

How they hurt you over
again I wish I had a wand
my freind to make it all go
away.

You are the knight amoung
many evil beings. A bright
light at the end of the tunel

HOw I just want to crawl into
your strong arms and let all my
woes out engulf me in your presence
take away my tears,sweep away my fears

I just want to do for you what you
did for me. For you to be happy for
all enterinity Please be safe my freind
for I would be truly lost without you.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2005-03-24 01:34 AM


NiCe writing...James
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-03-24 02:14 AM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-03-28 10:36 AM


beautiful sentiments Julie, well done.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-03-28 12:15 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
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5 posted 2005-03-28 01:19 PM


Great Job!
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
6 posted 2005-03-28 03:11 PM


thank ya to show him or not to show him is the ?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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