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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-03-23 05:04 PM


Life was an idea of someone who would treat you as a lady taking your scaps and thin carcase for a gault into the eyes and the movement and the scent

You saw the horizon on a morning comfortable down the hill always jobs hard but you finished and back into the yard fill up and bath in the skullery get the fish off

Always people in and people out and mam to sort things out

Where are they now

Where are those lives that lasted for hundreds of years

ON AN INTERNET GATHERING SIRE AND SITE COMPLETE WITH DNA AND ROADMAP COUTESTY OF ZIP AND POST CODES WHERE EVENTUALLY YOUR DNA WILL BE LINKED TO YOUR ADDRESS AND MOVE WITH YOU, and all I thought of was a windswept site where women worked to achieve and men worked to achieve, "as well".


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Ericc
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1 posted 2005-03-24 07:21 PM


Damn Dave....no one writes like you.
Every word like a sublte sledge hammer...reaching somewhere deep.

Eric

froggy
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2 posted 2005-03-25 08:39 PM


Hi Dave,
I like this.
Enjoyed the read too.
Happy Easter

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

marcel
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3 posted 2005-03-27 02:53 PM


interesting and thought provoking piece.

[This message has been edited by marcel (03-27-2005 03:26 PM).]

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-03-27 03:02 PM


Ericc

Damn Dave....no one writes like you.
Every word like a sublte sledge hammer...reaching somewhere deep.

Eric

I suppose I dont know any better Eric.

Thanks

Dave


froggy

Hi Dave,
I like this.
Enjoyed the read too.
Happy Easter

:-)
Within this heart you'll find love

Thanks Froggy - it is always there

Take care

Dave

marcel

The Way of Thingsā€¦

How heavy this burden we carry
While under the hot and cold glare of sky lit eyes,
Searching alone in the forgotten dreams of others
For the paths of true rights and honest wrongs;
Sometimes I wonder if time knows its relevance,
And if so...
Could it still be impartial to the whispers of silence?

We walk amongst one another as strangers
But we all are branded with tattoo tears and blood
Only seen when the moon dips
And the sun rises to promises---
Promises we will one day embrace and understand;
But not before those final three beats,
When the heart at last will cease to be.

Marcel

Marcel - your words are better than I could ever write.

Thank you

Dave

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