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Open Poetry #35

Shores - avert your eyes if you choose

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2005-03-23 03:59 PM

Upon the shores
Wrote a bunch of seekers after words and visions of all ages
Writing of the sky producing grey photographs of a lack of distinction
Argued at by Priests of every denomination
As to who could depict a sky

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2005-03-23 04:15 PM

excellent!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-23 04:19 PM

Very nicely written Sir.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-03-23 04:48 PM

Thanks

Maybe I am growing up, but I try to fight it at every chance.

Dave

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