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Enchantress
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0 posted 2005-03-23 03:11 PM





Perhaps tonight
if you don't mind  
could you   would you...just hold me?

Just for this evening
this one time..

no need for talk about our day
and what others had to say..
please   let your love surround me  
enfold me ~ just let me   be.

In your arms I feel sheltered   protected
nothing can harm or hurt me..
  I am free of all pain
     and the world is at peace.

There will be time   to talk   to laugh
to discuss our lives
and decide which path
we need to travel
but now, for tonight
please    just  hold me?


© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-03-23 03:16 PM


Oh, I am certain he will.
Beautiful Teed. Hugs & Miss Ya!!

Martie
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2 posted 2005-03-23 03:21 PM


Nancy
"Perhaps tonight
if you don't mind  
could you   would you...just hold me?"

This is needed so often, and gets lost in the daily termoil of moving too fast.  I've missed your poetry so I'm very glad to see this post today.  

[This message has been edited by Martie (03-23-2005 09:13 PM).]

Sunshine
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Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-03-23 03:27 PM


Oh Nancy, it is soooo good to see you post
and you bless us with such a beauty as this...

super hugs to ya lady!


Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-03-23 03:30 PM


Chris, Martie, Karilea & Donna.
Thank you so much sweet ladies...and sister o'mine.
It has just been one of those days yanno?
And I'm sure you know the feeling
of just wanting to be held.
Big hugs and thank you.

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2005-03-23 03:54 PM


Those quiet times when words are not needed
are the most meaningful of all!

Love the romance, Nancy~

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-03-23 04:14 PM


how gentle this is

touching piece

Enchantress
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8 posted 2005-03-23 04:15 PM


Bluesy and Dixie Gal...Hugs and thank you both!!
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9 posted 2005-03-23 07:58 PM


hugssss pretty lady......
I am sure the reward will be tender....

good to see ya posting...

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

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10 posted 2005-03-23 08:05 PM


Enchantress~
OH ... do I ever understand this one~

And *smiling here* ... the answer from my Bill is always, "Your very wish is my next action."

I'll be sharing this beauty with him~

Thank you for the lovely of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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SmartChick
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11 posted 2005-03-23 09:20 PM


Beautiful, Nancy. And, I hope your wish is his command.
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12 posted 2005-03-23 09:22 PM


SOOO beautiful, Nancy!  Missing those holding times more than any thing else.  Hopfully...someday I will find a guy that would love to just hold me.  

Hugs for this one!   ~  Becka

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13 posted 2005-03-23 09:24 PM


Lauren~The reward was very tender..thank you.

Marge~What a beautiful thing for Bill to say to you...how lovely that thought!  You are a very lucky lady!

Hi Sue!~Let's just say my wish was granted.  

Becka~Thank you and I hope your someday is soon!  Hugs.

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14 posted 2005-03-23 10:51 PM


LOVED it very nice!
Susan
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15 posted 2005-03-24 12:24 PM


Ah, you capture my own heart's desire this night - to just be held and comforted - such a lovely, heart felt piece -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2005-03-24 01:35 AM


Sounds like an excellent idea...James
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17 posted 2005-03-24 04:48 AM


Very lovely Nancy..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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18 posted 2005-03-24 06:47 AM


how very lovely and precious this is...loved this, thank you for sharing.
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19 posted 2005-03-24 08:42 AM


Beautifully expressed Tinker.  Your words have been missed here.  I'm so glad to read them again. A hug..just for you.

believe in what your heart feels...

ice
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20 posted 2005-03-24 08:46 AM


This man would have to be an idiot if you had to ask him twice to hold you.

enjoyed

___________ice/ford
   ><>

Enchantress
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21 posted 2005-03-24 09:03 AM



Earth Angel
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22 posted 2005-03-24 09:20 AM


Nancy, it is so ding dang wonderful to be reading your poetry this beautiful spring day.

At times I have felt exactly as you have expressed so eloquently and with such emotion. You haven't lost your touch, Dear Poetess!

Sending you a great big affectionate hug,
Linda

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23 posted 2005-03-24 10:06 AM


Writing just as poignant as it comes, m'dear.  Your skill and art in painting tales of love are so well done.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

inkedgoddess
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24 posted 2005-03-24 03:21 PM


such a simple gesture, with a monumental impact
nice to see your words again

Enchantress
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25 posted 2005-03-24 05:40 PM


Thank you all once again so much...
Sending big Easter bunny hugs out to all my friends at PiP!!

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26 posted 2005-03-24 08:52 PM


...Hold me...

   Words that echo around the world.  The simplicity of this is exquisite!

       miscellanea

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27 posted 2005-03-25 02:33 PM


Oh my dear sweet Nancy, Gary and I know these exact feelings.....just to hold and be held is so wonderful at times. Love just flows through the two who are in love. This hopeless romantic loves your poems of romance. I miss you, my friend.
Hugs,


Goodknight
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28 posted 2005-03-28 07:04 PM


Been missing your poetry Nancy - this is wonderful and much enjoyed.  Your writing is something special - Paul
miscellanea
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29 posted 2005-05-13 06:32 PM


When I saw this again, I realized I hadn't saved it in my library!  Glad I can send it to the top again.  It is wonderful to read it once again!

            miscellanea

Jaime Fradera
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30 posted 2005-05-14 09:59 PM


O, of course Nancy.
Of course,
Of course...
Jaime

Kristabell
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31 posted 2005-05-15 12:16 PM


Oh yes, what an excelent feeling. I love it! Nice write.
adagio
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32 posted 2005-05-15 06:52 PM


This brings wonderfull feelings to my heart and mind.Reminds me of one of my favorite things! I can truly relate.
adagio

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