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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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She, the bride of wind Taking pictures of filed dimness Hip to hip revolving doors Caught up in the circle Playing with an already lit fire Tortured leaving night shirts Tear at her neck Dropping her from the 30th floor With desires….that won’t stay quiet She’s puzzled by distance which Romping raindrops pelt Photographs of storms White and black Crippled addict Not able to think on her own In collections of ying and yangs She wears a thousand atoms Trying to iron her cloths Planting seeds that just won’t grow Trying to drive a professional’s Porsche Sucking on orange groves Migrant workers pick and choose Her emotional shell shocked blues Painting pictures of frightened deer Cornered by hunters And the wonder wheels of soggy no’s Waiting for a train to some, tomorrow rainbow Someone else is elbow deep in her dreams Picking through the carcasses Of blood fetish images, running like wet paint Stacking building blocks, way to hard to reach With Tuesday morning frowns Someone else’s climax Of splattered evening gowns From the Salvation Army & paper moon Asking everyone if they’ve found her shoes While holding up her car hood Screaming a semi-schizophrenic qualified statement That no one hears…. Unknown, not sure stanza, looking for permission She’s never breathed her own voice Culture, molesting time! watching a show about married woman with controlling husbands, and for you guys, visa versa very, very sad... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Someone else is elbow deep in her dreams Wow. Lee this one sentence alone gave me chills....not to mention your entire, awesome write! Keepin' this for .... well, just keepin' this. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes I just don't know what to say amazing |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Waiting for a train to some, tomorrow rainbow Someone else is elbow deep in her dreams What a powerful write!!!! I feel her shoes pinching my feet... wow!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she dwells in many as we follow her story she's already on the next page i like her and your words |
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