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Huan Yi
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0 posted 03-23-2005 12:28 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Everyone else
is asleep.

The weekend for late night maneuvers
or movies, the mornings
lost in bed.

Out of context
with the time,
three men load up their cars

that cough,
like camels being stirred;

the dawn
sung in by doves.

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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since 01-12-2004
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1 posted 03-23-2005 01:57 AM       View Profile for J.Samm   Email J.Samm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit J.Samm's Home Page   View IP for J.Samm

amazing how you could paint vivid images with brief, striking lines
Drauntz
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since 03-16-2007
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2 posted 05-01-2007 12:41 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

beautiful. top ten best.

"the dawn
sung in by doves."
nothing passes the beauty of this
 
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