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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2005-03-22 06:40 PM



            
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IN PERFECT RHYME
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
Behold the lotus blossom in the garden of thy soul,
Opening up in rainbow light to make thy spirit whole.
The showers of the springtime moisten each and every petal,
While up from the ground streams lodes of precious metal.
Breezes soft and gentle breathe sweet air into thy core,
While rays of golden sunshine kiss your each and every pore.
Your inner Light shall glow until the end of Father Time,
Joining fellow souls in perfect pitch and perfect rhyme.
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+




[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-23-2005 04:11 AM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2005-03-22 06:55 PM


Well done Linda, so positive and yes,
rhyming very well.  

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2 posted 2005-03-22 07:05 PM


Enjoyed...James
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-03-22 07:19 PM


Hi, Barry! ~ and thanks!

Have a pleasant evening!

Warm hug,
Linda

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4 posted 2005-03-22 07:20 PM


James ~

~ and I am pleased that you did! Thanks for dropping by!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2005-03-22 08:24 PM


Love it! Absolutely love it. This is a really great piece EA. My kind of poetry.
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6 posted 2005-03-22 09:42 PM


Beautiful poem and pic. hugs, Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2005-03-22 09:53 PM


EV2, you're AOK! I appreciate your enthusiastic response to my poem!

Love & Spirit Light,
EA
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8 posted 2005-03-22 09:55 PM


Nightshade ~

Hi, Chris! Glad you stopped by and that you liked my poem!

Love & Rainbow Light,
Linda

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9 posted 2005-03-23 01:50 AM


in perfect rhyme indeed! i love this line:

Opening up in rainbow light to make thy spirit whole.

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10 posted 2005-03-23 06:23 AM


Very beautiful Linda..thank you..

Goldenrose

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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11 posted 2005-03-23 10:15 AM


J S ~

Good morning! Thank you for reading my poem and for the lovely reply!

Have a great day!

EA

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12 posted 2005-03-23 10:16 AM


I thank you, Dear Rose of Gold!

Enjoy your day!

Warm hug,
EA

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13 posted 2005-03-23 08:06 PM


beautiful
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14 posted 2005-03-24 09:37 AM


p s



EA

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15 posted 2005-03-25 12:42 PM


This is absolutely lovely! *S*
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16 posted 2005-03-25 12:47 PM


suthern ~

Thank you, Beautiful Belle!

Hugs with oodles of affection,
Linda

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