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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
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0 posted 2005-03-22 04:56 PM


Strip me naked with just you're stare,
no-more blockage, scan beneath the surface-
what do you think to the real me?

All these scars still hurting
what happened before-
still have those doubts inside
Soul searching for a new piece of mind.

'Whispers' who are you, do i know you?
Oh you're hot, i so want you,
you won't get me with these words.

I'm a no-walled emotional person,
"Thoughtful freind" someone to talk to-
i'm listening to these messages

No rush to get you out of those clothes
Just want to have a conversation-
get to know you, not in you're sense
i'm not a one night talked about stand.

My freinds decide whom is perfect,,
So the saying go i don't feel this is right-
you have one chance from the moment we meet
to prove you're interests is it love or just me?

Do you really actually care,
lets see how long you can bare-
to wait for the lovers side of things
in love it won't matter you'll see.

© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-03-22 05:12 PM


You cover a lot in this but it is genuine and it took me back to other people who I heard utter the same sort of words including "the old gambit of the opposing person, you are a friend; no you're not; yes you are" that made me make damn certain to keep well out of it", and my mouth shut.

Nice one.

Dave

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