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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2005-03-22 10:58 AM



You bring me to the brinks
of insanity,
and make my mind real
   turning me inside out

       until I can't feel

the warmth once held
here in a heart
where chills begin

and walls of ice,

       again they start.

Sometimes I scream
  and curse your name

          Can't you see,
               I'm tired of this game?


All I ever wanted was
for our hearts     to be free
  but I can't give
      what you refuse to see.



I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
Let me dig a little deeper…
Nah, still nothing….
My give a DAMN is busted…..Jodee



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-22-2005 11:59 AM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-22 11:26 AM


I understand


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-03-22 11:35 AM


WOW!  Love it when you ramble Donna!
Excellent write..
Love ya lady~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2005-03-22 01:03 PM


GentlestSpirit~
Ramble on ... ramble on~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-03-22 02:31 PM


I love your rambling -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-03-22 06:26 PM


Donna, you raise rambling to a fine art!

Hugs with love,
Linda

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