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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-22 07:36 AM


Rewrite

The I, I am

I am the lion and the lamb
I’m the bitter and sweet of jam
I am the meal cooked until done
I am the multitude of one

I am the ball the echoes recall
I am the season’s winter till fall
I am the conscious rolled in rhyme
I’m the fluid the blood of time

I am the essence of dimension
I am the touch to touch extension
I am the eagle in its soar
I am the ego of the core

I am the Adam soul mate of Eve
I am the Adam turned to naïve
I’m the filigree made into grime
I’m the beginning and end of time

I am the I the I, I am
I am the lion and the lamb.



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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2005-03-22 07:47 AM


I am the I the I, I am
I am the lion and the lamb.

you are the canvas of bread
and the brush of sweet jam

good morning
its spring again !!!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-03-22 07:52 AM


inkedgoddess
Yes it is.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-03-22 08:19 AM


You're the sweet in a dream.
You're the coffee and the cream.

You're the bat ~ You're the ball.
You're the greatest of us all!

Happy spring hugs 'n kisses,
EA
Tulips

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-03-22 08:25 AM


Soul mate, yes...
naive? Never!






Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-03-22 08:27 AM


You are the *sigh* in poetry
You are the sugar in my tea.

This piece is a treasure Sy!
Into my library it goes!
~Morning hugs and a hot cup of Chai brew~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-03-22 08:31 AM


Earth Angel
You're the spring and the sure
And the lovely and the cure

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-03-22 08:34 AM


Sunshine
If you say so.

Nancy,
And you're the sweet in my tea


scorpio
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8 posted 2005-03-22 08:36 AM


Sy you are...creative and insightful. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-03-22 08:45 AM


scorpio
You just made my day.

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-03-22 09:09 AM


You am.....
just a wonderful man Sey!!  Delightful write

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-03-22 09:37 AM


Gentle,
A gentle comment, thank you.

MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-03-23 07:56 AM




  your an inspiratin
   to all~

enjoyed this~
maybe i should try one~

morning sir
thanks for the smmile~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-03-23 08:26 AM


MGROVES
Why not it was fun, thank you and good morning.

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