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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

0 posted 2005-03-22 01:54 AM

String the stars in white gold
clasped like a bracelet
set in sapphire sea's
let the moon linger sweet
until it burns with a glaze
to a beautiful phase
tasting the glare
of a splendor that teases
lapping like silk
through our hands.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2005-03-22 05:04 AM

This is lovely!!! I needed this peaceful beauty... thank you! *S*

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2005-03-22 05:56 AM

I love the moon , stars and the sea and you portrayed the scene most beautifully

Hope

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-03-22 07:43 AM

you just made the moon melt in the sky's embrace,
very nice touch of blonde on blonde

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-03-22 08:51 AM

this reminded me of complete and total serenity dear Bluesy gal...

simply lovely Lori, hugs coming at ya!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-03-22 08:53 AM

I see a slip of a girl
at the shore,
straining to wear
sea glints...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-03-22 08:57 AM

Lori, it sounds like you are writing of, and from, a very beautiful place. Your words were so calming that I am certain you must have lowered my heartbeat.

Thank you for this beautiful poem that you have gifted your readers with!

I do so enjoy it when the lovely of you spills forth.

Happy springtime hugs,
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-03-22 09:02 AM

Such lovely images here Lori..
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2005-03-22 10:43 AM

there is such a peace in this how beautiful this gift!

hugsss you miss seeing you here....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-03-22 11:32 AM

precious

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2005-03-22 03:06 PM

Absolutely Lovely Ms Blues

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2005-03-22 09:53 PM

Thanks to all you lovely ladies for your gracious replies.
I feel honored to be sharing the same page with you.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2005-03-24 10:32 PM

More than poem, this is a gentle picture of the one who wrote it. I like that very much.

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2005-03-25 08:41 AM

Lori?

Thank you so very much
for the wonderful inspiration.
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

14 posted 2005-03-25 09:09 AM

oh boy, I'm getting really homesick for the sea...this was exquisite....delightful...and made me long for the ocean....

Hugs

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2005-03-25 10:09 AM

Lori...I thought I'd replied to this....my mind must be slipping...it's very beautiful...I can see why Karilea was so inspired!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2005-03-25 10:54 AM

Ahhh shux, thanks so much.

Wishing you all a very Happy Easter Sunday.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

17 posted 2005-03-27 08:51 AM

Happy Easter, Lori

and love
M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2005-03-28 07:05 PM

Enjoyed...James

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

19 posted 2005-03-29 01:09 PM

Thanking you two, too!

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