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Open Poetry #35

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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-03-21 02:25 PM

pain how it has taken over
me,engulf my fear and
sickness. My love I need
you for your the sunshine
in my grey days.

Your the one that makes
my sickness fade away.
The touch of your hand
the kiss of your lips
floats me into a world
of bliss.

Come home soon
get the stuff done
I'm not doing to well
I need you I can't
live without my
sun.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-03-22 06:14 PM

It sounds almost like "The Sun ain't gon'e shine anymore".

Nice words.

Dave

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-03-22 06:33 PM

Enjoyed reading your soft words...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-03-22 10:56 PM

I can feel the longing in this write.
Well done. Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2005-03-23 11:47 AM

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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