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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-03-21 10:27 AM


Here I am
again,    in the corner
biting my lip
wondering what will happen next,
     what do I do?

Should I seek shelter
     or stand in your view,
do I shelter myself
under a blanket of humility
or stand proudly exposed

           if the naked truth be told

will you devour me
     just to toss me aside

or will you drink
  of the tears
     that I've cried,

will you feast upon me
and swallow me down
  into the depths of you
        until I can no longer be found?

Would you consume my soul
so that I may be one with you,
or will you send me into tomorrow,
still,    unknowing.

Tonight,
when you are done with me
will I be your sweet angel
or just the bitch  
   left discarded
         to be alone-
               with thoughts of

                   her own uncertainty?

{revised 3-21-05}
  



I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
Let me dig a little deeper…
Nah, still nothing….
My give a DAMN is busted…..Jodee




[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-21-2005 11:29 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-21 02:49 PM


how could anyone toss you away?

holding you in my heart

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-03-21 04:31 PM





Hang in there, baby...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-03-21 06:24 PM


~Sending heart hugs your way..
take care of YOU lovely lady~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

suthern
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4 posted 2005-03-22 04:39 AM


do I shelter myself
under a blanket of humility
or stand proudly exposed

Stand proudly, dear lady... for there is certainty only in never trying... certainty you'll never find the acceptance you so richly deserve.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-03-22 09:10 AM


hugs Ya'll!
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2005-03-22 10:46 AM




I know this.....hugssss

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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7 posted 2005-03-22 10:57 AM


this hurts
painful i know
being punished for loving someone

heres a hug

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2005-03-23 04:20 PM


I guess that's the chance we take,  to love completely and risk the heart ache!!

It's so hard to know.....
I felt every word you wrote here, Donna~

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-03-24 08:03 AM


to all of you, and thank you each....
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