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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-21 08:35 AM


secluded saturation
she makes rain in her meadow
and brings me rivers
with her hand cups

she bathes my root
with her saliva
and presses my thick limb
into her soft swallow sky

she is morning alone dance
she brings me her breasts
as clouds for my panting
and she begs me with wind

to drink of her pink dawn
til my hunger is ravenous
and her morsel is my addiction
she is cockling water then

poetry of riant ambrosia
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-03-21 08:43 AM



I want the dictionaries you peruse...


Smiling here
in the rain...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-03-21 10:42 AM


D - what a sensual read to wake me this morning - mmmmmmmm - can drown in the feel of this -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
3 posted 2005-03-21 10:56 AM


ms sun..thanks lady friend..word web works fine..grin
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susin...a place I go to often...rain forest feeling, secluded for my eyes only...could spend a lifetime there, you must visit sometime?  thanks babe

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-03-21 10:57 AM


she makes you admire her yes..  

lovely write Dark.  

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-03-21 02:39 PM


love this much
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