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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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0 posted 2005-03-21 07:11 AM


Down Some Faded Road Tonight

Down some faded road tonight
these wheels are racing for the light
a thousand miles from your cold shadow
a thousand miles till I find my soul
I am moving under angry black skies
dark clouds rolling by in my eyes
rolling back the years
traded for tears
cash in these dreams
for a new pair of jeans

Down some faded road tonight
I am wandering around, out of sight
I am wondering aloud, who's to blame
who shattered the glass of this love's frame
who cut and bled on these smiling faces
flashed in the pan, a blue flame erases
how we used to be
living happily
under a perfect blue sky
now perfect blue eyes cry

Down some faded road tonight
this heart beats for the sight
of a bright neon vacancy sign
buzzing over a heart on the line
someone who needs someone
someone tired, always on the run
from another cold shadow
perhaps just a turnoff to my soul
a half mile up this ghostly highway
I hit the turn signal and I pray

I am descending into the light
beyond the darkness I had to fight
fading from sight
down some faded road tonight

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-21 02:59 PM


love the feel of this one

kind of song-like

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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2 posted 2005-03-22 06:43 PM


Good meaty stuff

Dave

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
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3 posted 2005-03-23 02:02 AM


how we used to be
living happily
under a perfect blue sky
now perfect blue eyes cry

smart wordplay here...a very passionate write

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