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Alicethruglass
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0 posted 2005-03-20 08:30 AM



On this day the body aches,
slumps in front of,
knowing that emptiness is the cause of
and not the result of
that fog that steams the glass,
the warmth of the tub evaporating
the thoughts of sharing.

It is easier to give up then to pursue
or even be pursued when
that fine line has been crossed
twisted and then bent into
something unrecognizable.

Standing before length, nakedness
not a pretty sight for eyes that are blinded now,
blinded to thoughts non real,
ghost like wishes, memories always
reflected in the shadows that never were.

This Alice lives in a not so wonderland,
dream screaming, keeping awake
the only life known for now.

~A~

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-20 09:18 AM


Hoping Alice's dreams become happier soon.
Sending hugs your way~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2005-03-22 11:03 AM


~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2005-03-22 11:06 AM


feeling this one with you A....

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-22 11:29 AM


that fine line has been crossed
twisted and then bent into
something unrecognizable.

understood

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