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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-03-19 09:19 PM


If I Were In Love With You


Wonder what I'd do
if I were in love
with you.

I'd go to a matinee
with you, and after
the movie was through,
we could take a long walk
in the park, in moonglow
it wouldn't be so dark.

And there, I would plant
a kiss upon the silkiness
of your waiting lips.

That's exactly what I'd do,
if I were in love with you.


JamesLee
March18
2005

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-19 09:22 PM


Ahhhh...this is lovely James...
Any woman would love an evening like this.
Hugs~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-03-19 09:48 PM



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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-03-19 10:00 PM


Very nice James. Enjoyed. Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-03-19 10:21 PM



Gosh, now you have me wishing that you were in love with me! lol


Linda

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5 posted 2005-03-20 07:07 AM


awww...she's one lucky,lucky girl
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-03-22 03:43 AM


Thank you Enchantress, passing shadows, Nightshade, Earth Angel and J.Samm for the especially nice responses...
I know that I used the word "If" in this but I have been in love with my girlfriend for a long time now...James

saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
7 posted 2005-03-22 11:01 AM


Your girlfriend is one lucky woman!!!

God bless, JM!

Becka

Foxyoasis
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8 posted 2005-03-23 10:53 PM


I do love your poetry so nicely done as always

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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