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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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it is Sunday my hair feels like a mass of leaves i stare at the daffodil at her spilling, at my fingers at my life that is held inside my hands in criss-cross curvy paths and I did not enter church like Christ entered Jerusalem to receive his ghost and the olive branch no I did not exchange any “peace be with you’s” and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never was one for church myself another awesome write DA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This sought home in me.... jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
No? Then we have a date, don't we?  And yes, there are days when I wear my bad mood like chain-mail armor, as you, my dear heart, have probably learned by now. sigh. Love you m'lady? and if I can't wish you peace? How 'bout a little serenity?  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*tossing branches to Maree*  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"my hair feels like a mass of leaves i stare at the daffodil at her spilling, at my fingers at my life" Maree, my friend....you don't need to enter a church to find something holy. Those things above are life and beauty and therefore holy.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Simple tunes the ear to listen...as the heart hears it's own song, and reverberates the sacred sweetness. Liked this...fresh, and captivating in it's strength. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I often find His sanctuary underneath His open skies... this is extremely personal, and telling, all in a very few words... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome. hugs, Chris You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
deep thoughts deeply felt over here i push thru the branches and try to make spring but the ice stalls |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
 There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I dont find him where he is "supposed" to be Maree, I find him exactly where he needs to be... This is as lovely as you are m'dear....Hugs. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you everyone, ya'll too kind. smiling back at ya Jamie  and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is so much to be said for the olive branch. I like all that it implies, and I don't think you need to go to church to extend or accept it. God is love, and he/she understands. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 *nods* yep...me too.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ms Blues, I thank you Susan, nodding with ya and back at ya..thank you. M'lady? "and if I can't wish you peace? How 'bout a little serenity?" a little, will do me just fine....for now heh thank you all so much. and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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