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A Soul in Transition (the I AM Challenge)
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A Soul in Transition (the I AM Challenge) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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...just saw this, looked like fun...really enjoyed reading all the "challenger's) responses. You guy's are such an awesome group. ~~~ Soul in Transition I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled I wonder if there’s really a God, when I’m sure there is I hear angel wings in the night I see spirits in the dark I want to be what I’m not I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled I pretend to be like everyone else – a facade I feel the emotions of others I touch their souls hoping they know I worry all is for naught I cry when other’s shed tears I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled. I understand the feelings we have I say open your eyes, believe in the sky I dream there’s truth in my beliefs I try hard to live within their bounds I hope it really wasn’t all for naught I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled. W. James Beard, Jr. © march 2005 |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
a spirit unfulfilled ~perfect description~ ~A~ |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled This is the best line I have read in a while. Challenge well met, Sir. In the wooden chair |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled." Brava!! Challenge well met sir! Oooh how I love the above line!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh I soooo know this - this is a wonderful piece - filled with the light of your spirit-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done, Jimmy!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"I say open your eyes, believe in the sky" I see a person who looks at clouds in analysis and wonder. Enjoyed reading about who you are. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley A good responce enjoyed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Count yourself among the awesome. *S* I like this very much... like Ringo said... your opening line is fantastic! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"I am a soul in transition, a spirit unfulfilled" I believe this applies to us all and I found the whole piece most insightful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ 'I cry when other’s shed tears' For all you are ... this says soooooo much~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! challenge well met!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, Good Lord Jimmy, this is amazing. It's just perfect. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No competition for this one -- it's right up there at the top! Exactly the kind of thing I'd have written, if I could. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James, I hear you. I feel you. I like you. I truly believe that it "wasn’t all for naught". May your spirit glow with the Light of your beautiful essence.  Love & Light, Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Timeless beauty, a soul in transition. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Jimmy this is excellent. Challenge has been met and surpassed !! hugs, Chris You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow. |
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