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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-03-19 05:08 AM


To leave, go into
the void, into bliss.
Eden isles wait
after the heart.

To the far shore
of silver wave horses,
adrift on see-saw ebb,
marooned by God's paradise.

Tousled before my
maker, master, life.
Overwhelmed by the
epitome of love.

Whiteing out,
to dwell in
eternal ecstasy,
tellurians beyond recall.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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Susan
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1 posted 2005-03-19 10:14 AM


Would that we could all transcend into bliss, even if for only a moment -

Enjoyed this - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-03-19 10:22 AM


Very much enjoyed this lovely piece.
hugs, Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2005-03-21 04:48 AM


Susan... so glad you enjoyed this..i do like spiritual poetry...why shouldnt we think of our paradise to come?...Thank you again..

Goldenrose.

Chris...very pleased you enjoyed the poem...the other side is a place we will all go to...i like to imagine what the elysian fields are like...thank you so much for your kind reply...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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