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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2005-03-18 07:00 PM


one of these days,
I will write a good song
when rhythm comes to me
or when I get around it

till then
I shall just say
that I will keep on waiting
with my desires
under wraps
hoping they give me
enough warmth
to last another

winter

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-18 07:13 PM


Smiling back at you...wonderful this!!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-03-18 07:22 PM


winter is almost over
thank goodness!

suthern
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3 posted 2005-03-19 01:50 PM


I like this very much... though those unfulfilled desires can be uncomfortable company... even if they keep one from freezing. *S*
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4 posted 2005-03-19 03:40 PM


SudhirMyFriend~
I like the 'fluff' of your stuff~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-03-20 01:14 PM


Rough fluff, friend...
those elusive moments...


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-03-20 02:37 PM


Sudhir,
I'm sure you will, enjoyed.

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2005-03-21 08:17 AM


warm thoughts
warm memories
shield a bit
the dark of winter

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-03-21 08:40 AM


As the saying goes, "All good things come to those who wait!" ~ and I hope your waiting time is soon to be over!

Big hug,
Linda

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2005-03-22 11:49 AM


you amaze me ...



many, many thanks...

regards
sudhir

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