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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2005-03-18 05:38 PM


look at the sparkles
that the night spears
one by one
lights fall out
and fade

listen
i said i was here
i still am

been years, many years.

am still waiting
here

and you?

must still be
laughing



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-18 07:26 PM


sad stuff here
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2005-03-19 12:02 PM


writer's block?

I doubt that. If this is a block, I'll take a truckload.

A wry tone tempered by a gentle pen.

Loved it.

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3 posted 2005-03-19 12:25 PM


Sudhi, it's always an enlightening earful, listening to the thoughts you cast into the wind
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2005-03-22 11:50 AM


thank you all...

and yes, serene one, a block it is... really...

regards
sudhir

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