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0 posted 2005-03-18 01:29 PM



Crooked arms waving
beckoning to me
as the March winds
whistle a familiar tune
of nature's renewal.
I approach hesitantly,
my hair whipping
in the breeze
like unattended ribbons
on a May pole.
The sharp call of a jay
catches me off guard.
Looking up, my face
is teased, tickled
by velvet, grey
kitten toes.
My sweater catches, snags
as I twirl and giggle
within it's paw-like grasp.
Ah yes! Revival!
Another winter endured
Another spring to celebrate
And I am but a human
ball of yarn
To the playful
pussy willow.
.
.
.


Chris Barker
~~~~~~



© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-18 01:32 PM


Lovely Chris, I see your hair swirling in the March spring wind...~P
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2 posted 2005-03-18 01:57 PM


Thanks choshi! lol.....my hair used to whip around in the wind....but...since it was lopped off....it sort of twirls.
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3 posted 2005-03-18 04:37 PM


Good one Chris...
reminds me I need fresh pussy-willows.
Quite a cold wind yet today...but soon!!
~Hugs, miss and love ya, Teed~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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4 posted 2005-03-18 05:55 PM


Thanks Teed. Oh, they're bloomin' right now alrighty! We do love those pussywillows!
Hugs & Miss Ya.

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5 posted 2005-03-19 06:26 AM


Hello, sweet Lady!!
Spring is almost here, isn't it??
Miss you.
Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2005-03-19 08:21 AM


Nightshade,

   Truly a touch of radiating Spring! Over the past couple of years, I've catalogued many poems, but this has got to be one of my very favorites.  I can't describe how free it makes me feel...
              
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7 posted 2005-03-19 08:52 AM


Ethel - miss you too! Many thanks & hugs.

misc - what a lovely thing to say! Thankyou so much. Hugs.

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8 posted 2005-03-19 08:53 AM


wonderful! i wish we had spring here in the Philippines, but we only have two seasons: rainy and dry...i bet springtime is beautiful for it has inspired a lot of poets such as you...beautiful sights, vividly presented-well done!
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9 posted 2005-03-19 08:59 AM


J. Samm - hello & thankyou for reading and commenting. yes, springtime is lovely to witness as are all of the seasons in this part of the world. faraway hugs to you !!
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10 posted 2005-03-19 10:21 AM


This is beyond delightful and smiles my heart warm - wonderful Chris -

Susan

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11 posted 2005-03-19 04:44 PM


Thankyou & Hugs Susan!
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12 posted 2005-03-20 09:10 AM


What a wonderful picture you paint...
"I am but a ball of yarn for the pussywillows"

Perfect.
TD

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13 posted 2005-03-20 09:31 AM


Thankyou TD. Glad you enjoyed. Hugs!
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