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Open Poetry #35

pandemon's monkey

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-18 07:04 AM

bend the bridge over gravy
there are tears from pines
with bad knees
that waded in the mud mouths

and now they drift to spring
like metal buckles
gouging fenders into graffiti
when the fat man washes windows

on tiptoes in broken down shoes
laceless with gum as a part time job

I heard the liar speak
when she peeked in the sky
but I didn't understand
her words with hands over my ears

and an umbrella under my arm
just in case there was truth
in the spit of her whisper
and my ducky wouldn't float

much better than a sponge budda
with alum ink on his aluminum
but today still has sun light left
in the five celled pretention

of a dashlit hollow flashlight

___________
dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-18-2005 09:02 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-18 07:08 AM

You certainly don't monkey around
with your thoughts...

Good morning, Sir.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2005-03-18 08:11 AM

well the weather lady said there would be no rain today...but she was wearing a slicker..sooooooooo

thanks suny one

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-03-18 08:22 AM

Dark
Reminds me of the childrens song. Round and round the mulbery bush, all fall down.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2005-03-18 09:42 AM

D, you're sounding more and more like a pacific nor'westerner.
Enjoyed the dark light tone of this.

K

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-03-18 10:11 AM

D- I delight in your wit and your view - hope the sun smiles on you today

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-03-18 02:47 PM

sir sy and kahlil, thanks to you for the read and comments

suzzsin no sun here mrs..but you brought some new eye day thank you for that

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