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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-03-18 01:30 AM



naked apes attack first reason last;
strangers under lamp posts when friends
the challenge for differences wet palates
colours turned up in Bogart style

people are strangers even when friends
friendly to those who ask for nothing
favours confused for comaradery
challenges wet the palate
as diversity means irritation

funny I should call friends friendly
when forgetful when self-centered
naked apes attack for self agrandizement
moreso than forums of tranquility


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-18 06:17 AM


yes Martin, sad but true
J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
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Iloilo City, Philippines
2 posted 2005-03-18 06:48 AM


naked apes attack first reason last;

yes, it happens...a good write here, quite satirical and fun keep it up!

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