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Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2005-03-17 08:40 PM



A Plea for inspiration

This is a plea for inspiration.
I have this illness, riders block
It's okay, you won't catch it,
we all get it.
This makes it harder
to ride the ethereal cyber spacewaves,
where some things are morphing into matter,
while others are evaporating into spirit.
Night by night,
I wait for the dream muse,
the  creatrix deep inside me
to tell me another story ...
that she might generate another dream that I might post up here ...
Meanwhile I plead with you, my invisible audience:
what would you like me to ride about?
Have I left something unwritten, or unsaid? ...
It seems odd
that I should feel so lonely,
and wish I had more unread messages?
Well, okay okay ... I'll get over it----as usual.
And tomorrow will bring something new,
like it always does.
This is probably a sloppy "poem,"
being both spontaneous and extemporaneous.
Maybe it was Suetang's poem,
I dream her into being,
that got me teary-eyed.
It feels like there-s nothing left to say ...
but maybe tomorrow or next week,
maybe then, there will be ...
maybe ... ... ..

SC

I'll just take the medicine and go to bed.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-03-17 08:49 PM


Jaime, I suppose you are now in bed and dreaming up your next poem! Perhaps it is just your Day Muse who is on vacation! ~ Mind you, if you can communicate your thoughts this well, I doubt that she is very far away!

Dream sweet!

P.S. I do believe that you just made poetic lemonade out of those sour lemons! lol

Loves and hugs,
EA

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-03-18 01:08 AM


"to ride the ethereal cyber spacewaves,
where some things are morphing into matter,
while others are evaporating into spirit"

you know how to ride those spacewaves just fine, amigo


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-03-18 03:04 AM


enjoyed this
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2005-03-18 03:25 PM


Jaime

I hope your muse returns soon.  I know how frustrating it can be when the words don't flow.

For you :

"Every artist dips his brush
in his own soul, and paints his
own nature into his pictures"

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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